We have another young writer's work to share with you today. The author of this piece of writing is not more than ten years old. How many of us can claim to write like this?
The child has very skilfully woven an anecdote and a joke into his description of a friend (Not an easy feat!)
The emphasis clearly is not on the physical characteristics of the subject (friend), typical of most descriptive essays, but on the personality of the friend and the friendship between the author and the said person.
We find almost all types of advanced punctuation from semicolon to ellipsis in this creative work.