Learn2Write | Student Writing

Remarkable sketches: Volume 14

       In describing an underwater scene, the student has built a fascinating picture with master strokes
       of figurative and sensory language. The elegant use of metaphors, similes, personification,
       oxymoron and alliteration is well-supported by rich and sophisticated vocabulary. Sounds and
       sights have been weaved fluently into the description, allowing the reader to create mental
       pictures. Some instances of advanced punctuation have been flaunted by the student to create an
       impact. The choice of each word is deliberate and purposeful.

Remarkable Sketches: Volume 10

Local residents raising funds to save their library! The venture is not only extraordinary, but deserves to be told in an unparalleled manner. 

 
The write-up below by a Year 5 student showcases her talent right at the outset with an intriguing title. The introductory paragraph discloses what has been the source of the entire funds-raising drive. This following middle paragraph establishes the background to the closure and reopening of the library. Each of the rescue endeavours are mentioned systematically; while, the write-up throughout is studded with realistic instances of direct speech. Finally, the happy culmination talks about the consequences of the library being saved for the fortunate saviours.
 

 

Remarkable Sketches: Volume 9

It is natural for a kid to set a store by his beloved toy received from mom, dad, grandparents or a buddy. However, the write-up below really stands out due to the child's genuine expressions of what he feels about his special present and how he experiences it.
 
From the perspective of a review, it is well framed covering descriptions of the packaging, all the components, batteries, material, design and structure of the gizmo. Even negative feedback isn't held back and certain complications of operating the toy are shared honestly with the audience.
 
Towards the culmination, the price, worth and rating are provided along with a recommendation that other children too buy it.